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Color refined rendition of Pulsar Pureheart displaying her "Pulsar Tornado" attack

It is one of Pulsar Pureheart's powerful offensive moves, the "Pulsar Tornado", where she spins around in super-speed into a gale-force mini-hurricane. Useful for clearing an area of villains and stopping stray tornadoes.

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:iconcaptainzammo:
OK I'm on record for liking Pulsar. This scene is a great turn around, allowing us to see the multiple sides of Ms Pureheart. The tornado attack doesn't seem completely out of character for her, but it doesn't really seem to fit for her either. You have several other characters with the cyclonic attack. It seems to me that Pulsar might have a signature move more in line with some of her other skills. Since her costume is two part (mismatched sleeves and boots) I think it might make more sense to have her have a mismatched attack--say hot ona cold blasts? or a Pulsar and magnetic attack? Just some ideas. Again, LOVE Pulsar, just not keen on this attack.
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:icondjwill:
"You sping me Rigth Round, Pulsar Rigth Round like a record, Pulsar, Rigth Round Round Round!" xD

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:iconexevalon:
She has a neat costume design.

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:icondangerman-1973:
Thanks.

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:iconhyakkidour4n:
I kinda agree with that critic saying Pulsar could use an ultimate attack that would feel more "trademarked". Not that I would ever mock the destructive power of a tornado or the usefulness of such a power in any arsenal. She can definitely keep the tornado, but she indeed probably deserves better for her ultimate.

It's especially easy to find something with a name like Pulsar Pureheart... It kinda contains an attack name in itself!
A pulsar is a kinda potentially very destructive phenomenon, so doing the obvious "Heart Pulsar" attack would actually be a fitting ultimate attack!
Sometimes obvious just works. ( Of course, You'll still have to think up how it would look and work exactly if you choose to roll with my suggestion, don't intend to steal your chara ;) )

On the drawing itself side, it doesn't really feel like she is attacking or even spinning considering the pose you chose : it feels like it lacks movement.
Somehow it looks more like a 3-view practice from a mannequin reference, and from that perspective, it's a success as the same pose is indeed correctly drawn from different angles...
...But that wasn't really the goal here, alas.

I understand that you wanted to do a different pose than your wonder cop spin one, so you get kudos for trying something different, but this new pose just doesn't work as well.

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:iconjp-v:
Looks not too bad I suggest the tornado could do with a little more shadow and lighting because it's not as convincing to see her spinning that's just my thought!
:iconjoekearon:
I have to agree, the Wonder Woman-esque attack does need work.

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:iconcaptainfusion:
The tornado effect is pretty nice, it is also pretty nice with a action shot.

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:icondangerman-1973:
Yeah. I thought I could experiment with this pose. I downgrade this attack to "one of her most powerful offensive" but not "signature" moves.

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Fixed.

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